*snuggles* So the writing's going well, then, eh? Lol, that Mercy of yours sounds like one demanding task-master all right, but at least you're making progress!
I didn't get time to properly read your snippet from the other day [and it's disappeared from public view?] but I did when I got home and dude, you are right to be proud of that section. Obviously, I had no background and little context to read it in, but I was swept away with the vivid descriptions of the environment and the characters were very fascinating. I loved your imagery, I think you have a particular talent for setting a scene and making it come to life.
[On a random note, have you seen Phoebe in Wonderland? Totally random, but that's what this made me think of in a tenuous, weakly correlated kinda way that's totally unrelated but for my brain]
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I didn't get time to properly read your snippet from the other day [and it's disappeared from public view?] but I did when I got home and dude, you are right to be proud of that section. Obviously, I had no background and little context to read it in, but I was swept away with the vivid descriptions of the environment and the characters were very fascinating. I loved your imagery, I think you have a particular talent for setting a scene and making it come to life.
[On a random note, have you seen Phoebe in Wonderland? Totally random, but that's what this made me think of in a tenuous, weakly correlated kinda way that's totally unrelated but for my brain]